Comments on: From Bard to Verse https://www.zeusblog.tetrap.com/?p=88 Mon, 30 Dec 2013 20:16:07 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Peter A https://www.zeusblog.tetrap.com/?p=88&cpage=1#comment-177 Peter A Sun, 22 Apr 2007 18:41:50 +0000 http://www.zeusblog.tetrap.com/?p=88#comment-177 That'll do :) That’ll do :)

]]> By: the_other_dave https://www.zeusblog.tetrap.com/?p=88&cpage=1#comment-176 the_other_dave Sun, 22 Apr 2007 10:38:59 +0000 http://www.zeusblog.tetrap.com/?p=88#comment-176 ..." because you smell of cheese?" …” because you smell of cheese?”

]]> By: Peter A https://www.zeusblog.tetrap.com/?p=88&cpage=1#comment-175 Peter A Sun, 22 Apr 2007 06:17:32 +0000 http://www.zeusblog.tetrap.com/?p=88#comment-175 Fella, your scansion is painful To the point I suggest you seek gainful Employment as catcher Of rats, or dispatcher And I'm buggered if I can make this last line work. Fella, your scansion is painful
To the point I suggest you seek gainful
Employment as catcher
Of rats, or dispatcher
And I’m buggered if I can make this last line work.

]]> By: the_other_dave https://www.zeusblog.tetrap.com/?p=88&cpage=1#comment-174 the_other_dave Sun, 22 Apr 2007 03:35:12 +0000 http://www.zeusblog.tetrap.com/?p=88#comment-174 or A good review, and not adverse (although a fortnight belated) In a witty and stylish verse, that will be endlessly emulated. or

A good review, and not adverse
(although a fortnight belated)
In a witty and stylish verse,
that will be endlessly emulated.

]]> By: the_other_dave https://www.zeusblog.tetrap.com/?p=88&cpage=1#comment-173 the_other_dave Sun, 22 Apr 2007 03:17:03 +0000 http://www.zeusblog.tetrap.com/?p=88#comment-173 A wiity verse that notes so much Of this adventure's toos and frows With fan opinion divided such That it's brilliant, or that it blows. A wiity verse that notes so much
Of this adventure’s toos and frows
With fan opinion divided such
That it’s brilliant, or that it blows.

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